Argumentative essay

Wednesday 29 August

In the afternoon class, we have to do a argumentative essay by individual. Miss Zu was teaching how to write an argumentative essay because usually question of argumentative essay will come out in final exaination.

After that, we had to do an essay based on the question given....

This is my essay for argumentative essay..

Women are becoming bolder as well as more aggressive and men are more sensitive

                As a human being, as we know men and women have their own advantages and disadvantages. Some people claim that their gander is more excellent but it is actually depend to that person. Sometime in the other side men is more expert and as well as women. It is influence by the nature and the environment. In this era of globalisation, sometime men job are become as women carrier and the other sides. For example, normally we say that women are more expert to cook and become a chef but nowadays it is monopoly by men likes our famous chef in Malaysia is chef Wan. Due to that, although some women are brave and aggressive and certain men are sensitive but I still believe that men are becoming bolder and more aggressive as well as women are more sensitive.

            Those who are against these ideas may say that certain women are involved in a dangerous situation and become as a police, soldier, pilot and marine. According to Leila (2006) stated that from the childhood her ambition is became a police and she has proven that she a brave women. This job are fully need of brave to involve in this situation. It is fair to said that women are not enough brave without evaluate them first? We should respect women ability and can do a something challenging and has a high risk. With that, clearly we cannot judgment women as a weak person. Furthermore, we cannot simplify all women are coward because have many woman are become a leader. For example a woman has a child and her husband was passed away, she can protect her child by their own without getting help from others. What they say might be true. However, in a reality we seen than man are braver compared to women.  Men are born to be a leader and women should be protecting as well as they is week person. Even is Islamic religious, man should be a leader. To be a leader, once should becoming bolder. Machiavelli said that as a leader, we cannot make an impetuous decision but must brave to make a brilliant decision. Furthermore, usually we see that movie preferred by man is horror movie likes ghost or something like that and for women they is more preferred to watch a thriller movie such as romantic or joking movie. In short, no doubt to say that men are braver compared to women.

Some people might feel that women are has an aggressive attitude. Psychologists are proving that women are pretend to be more dispersion and they believe there are many factors contribute toward a person spiralling into dispersion such as pressure in job or study, death of family member and a bad influence of friend. Perry (2009)women are easily to stress and tension.  To be   In this, women are fell tension. This situation usually occurs especially went they in menstruation cycle, they are in unbalance condition. They swiftly to be a moody and this might to be more aggressive. Actually women are difficult to balance their emotion and will make them in depression. As a result, they will do and unexpected thing and more aggressive toward others person. Due to the fact claim is true. Nevertheless, Men is actually more aggressive because they are may too be more hot tampered. There are easily defy challenge and went they are loss, the might shame and at last, they might to quarrel. In that, they will be terrorized toward others. Thus, clearly we can see that men are more aggressive than women.

            Opponents may say that men are a sensitive person. Although they seem brutal and macho, they actually a sensitive person. They may take heart especially when it involves his belonging such as some people libel him or her family. Besides that, men are sensitive went women that more high rank admonish him. They cannot accept than women are has more high rank. In that, he may be more sensitive. However, this statement might be irrelevant due to the fact that claim women are more sensitive. As a women nature, they has a soft heart that easily take heart especially went the statement is not true. Furthermore, they also will sensitive went someone tell their appearance are not good enough. As we know, women always want look beauty while went has people said something bad to her appearance, they might take serious because there is more sensitive. Thus, in this situation, women are more sensitive than men.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that men are more brave and aggressive while women are more sensitive. They are many facts that we can see based on the statement. So, do you think that statement is relevant? Just recap from our viewer and seen from our once experience. When we say a bolder and aggressive word? We will imagine for a man while went we say sensitive, we are more prefers to women. Based on that, it is clearly show that my statement is strongly enough due to the fact that are been prove. Lastly, I to say again than men are more brave and aggressive while women are more sensitive.

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REFFERENCE:

Leila, (2006), women are more independent and more brave compared men - It is true? Retrieved September 1, 2012, from http://www.powermenandwomen/drl/paper.com

Perry, (2009, August 16).women are more sensitive than men. Retrieved September 1, 2012, from http://www.control.way//G:assgment/resoures//.html

Problem and solution essay

Monday, 27 August 2012

ASSALAMUALAIKUM
today class was postponed at night which is at lab. We were asked to do an essay again. As usual, we have  to divide into 5 groups. My group members are Afiq, Nisa, Amanda, Hajar and Rina (me) . Miss Zu asked us to choose 1 of the 5 movie clips. my group got movie (OPEN HOUSE THIEVE )

this is the my group essay :

Open houses are a long-standing tradition in the sale of residential real estate to show more people to a home for sale. The real estate agents put out signs on road or near street corners to draw drive-by traffic and usually list the homes in the real estate sections of newspapers to bring in more people. At an open house, the real estate agents show off their latest properties and entice prospective buyers with the warmth and luxury of a "lived-in" home. But this time-honoured tradition has unexpectedly opened the door to more than just interested buyers (Johnson, 2012). Thieves are also finding gold mines in these attractive homes. The are some factors of people stealing some of item in an open house which are they being attracted the items in the house, lack of securities as well as they have influence by friends to take some of the items in the house.

The first factor that contribute people to steal in an open house is they attracted to the items that have in the open house as a display. Some of the open house put a valueable thing as a display to make more attractive and ellegent for viewing. Normally open house events and home viewings are a wonderful for getting your house noticed in a big way. However, while the majority of people coming through our  home are likely to be legitimate prospective buyers, there is also the risk that some of them will be more interested in what they can steal from our home. According to (Sharon,2012), some of person use a tactic act like a pergnant women. It is because to discover their stelling thing. So, the people do not notice than they are actualy as a thief. Open house thieves are quick to size up the flow of the crowd and opportunities to steal. Favorite targets include glassware, silverware, jewelry, laptops, and prescription drugs. Some thieves are even cagey enough to steal only a few pills instead of the whole bottle so the theft will go unnoticed. Thus, the best way solution of this problem is the open house should remove the valuable things. Do not put them in a drawer that it is  too easy for a thief to open it when no one is looking. Instead, lock them in the trunk of your car or place them in a safety deposit box. (Rowland, n.d.)

The second  factor of  people stealing in an open house is no securities provided by the real estate agent in the open house.  When no securities in the open house, people easily steal the value things on the table, kitchen and everywhere. Real estate agent must aware the visitor that come in the house because we are do not know whether they have a good or bad attitudes. This problem we must solve because it makes the agent loss to pay all the lost things. In order to solve this problem , real estate agent must put a security cameras in and out a house. In addition , real estate agent must put minimum 10 security camera at different place for example dining room , room , kitchen , garage , stare and outside the house. This solution can make the visitors or thieves scare to steal a things in a house because the security camera is monitor by the security guard. Based from a information of safe guard the world in the United Stated home break-ins occur every 13 seconds and homes without security systems are up to 300% more likely to be broken into.

Finally, influenced from bad friends also one of the factors for stealing from the open house. Mostly,every open house stiil got an item for them to display since someone did not confirmly buy the house and the house still have the truthful owner. Based on this situation, the thieft will take this chance to openly steal the item from the houses.They will bring one or two friends to back up them when they stealing but,sometimes the thieft also will influence their friends to take part and steal from the houses. This in turn causes someone who did not even think about stealing  to steal and soon it will become bad habits for them. It shown how influence from friends which is long time thieft will cause someone who only come to the open house to see the house, become a thieft and steal an items from the open house. Hence, to solve this problem they should take time to think about this situation. According to Neik (2012), they should think for a moment and take a little space about the person they are right now compared to the person they were when they in one or two years ago. What qualities have they take from the people who surround them? If the change come in positive or negative ways?If their friends only influenced them to take part in stealing escpecially in open house it directly shown that they are not a good person to be with.People like them will never back up when someone is getting trouble and only thinking about their self pleasures and according to Neik (2012), sometimes we have to leave behind those who are not willing top change with us to do good activities.

                In conclusion, being attracted at the things in the house, lack of securities and influence by bad friends are the three factors which contribute to the stealing from open house. The habit of stealing must be prevented as this can give impact especially to the real estate agent.  It will also be affected by the other visitors who came to the open house. This is because the open house is to show to he visitors or buyers who want to buy the house. It will be not interesting if the open house is empty without any decorations or items in it. Therefore, it is necessary that real estate agents as well as the visitors to do some efforts to overcome this problem such as hire safety guard, hide or remove the valuable items in the house and think before do an action.

REFERENCES

Johnson, J. (2012). Demand media. Retrieved August 21, 2012, from         homeguides.sfgate.com/meaning-open-houses-1222.html

Neik, A. (2012). How your friends influene your life. Retrieved August 21, 2012, from             http://www.divinecaroline.com/22050/83744-friends-influence

Rowland, T. (n.d.). Estate homes and properties. Retrieved August 21, 2012, from             http://www.homesbytia.com/avoid-theft-during-an-open-house-pasadena-ca.htm

Safe guard the world. (2008). Retrieved August 21, 2012, from             http://www.safeguardtheworld.com/statistics.html

Sharon G.F, (2012, April 10) Protecting  yourself aginst open house theft.. Retrieved        August 21, 2012, from http://voices.yahoo.com/protecting-yourself-against-open-    house-theft-11195196.html

I think that all for today. By all the practice that i had done, i hope that can improve my english.

BEHIND THE SCENE

Monday, 13 August 2012

          Hi, today class we had an interesting activities. This activities is like a forum that we should story about the movie.We are divided into 4 group. I am a grop with Hanifah,Suhana,rafidah and Afiq. After randomly choose topic, my group get Athur Christmas. Owh my god, Who can I present while I never been this movie? oh no. Thank to Hanifah and Afiq that use his smart phone to surf internet. From that, we can a little bit information about the story.

    
  <----THE IS OUR CLASS
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  THE FIST GROUP : 

 

                                       

 NAME OF THE SHOW : FAMIRAZIZ

NAME OF THE SEGMENT : ARE YOU BRAVE ENOUGH???

THE HOST : FARA THE VOGUE

LIST OF THE PANELS : 

1. MIMIDRIS as The Director
2. AIDA AZMANI as the Producer
3. SHAWAL ARABELLA as the Main actor
4. JUST MAN as an actor
5. ZAHIRA MIXIE as an actor

SYNOPSIS OF THE STORY  : This story is about a Princess Merida where she is a skilled archer and impetuous daughter of King Fergus and Queen Elinor. Determined to carve her own path in life, Merida defies an age-old custom sacred to the uproarious lords of the land: massive Lord MacGuffin, surly Lord Macintosh and cantankerous Lord Dingwall. Merida’s actions inadvertently unleash chaos and fury in the kingdom, and when she turns to an eccentric old Witch for help, she is granted an ill-fated wish. The ensuing peril forces Merida to discover the meaning of true bravery in order to undo a beastly curse before it’s too late.

                                                     

                                                                        GROUP 2

  

                               NAME OF THE SHOW : SYAHIRA HAMDAN.

                               NAME OF THE SEGMENT : A NEW FILM; PREVIEW ARTHUR CHRISTMAS.

                               THE HOST : SYAHIRA HAMDAN.

THE LIST OF PANELS :

1. HANIFAH as the Director
2. SUHANA SUKRI as the Main actor
3. RAFIDAH as an actor
4. RINA as an actor
5. AFIQ ALIAS as the Spectator

SYNOPSIS OF THE STORY : This story is about: Set on Christmas night, the story of Arthur Christmas at last reveals the incredible, never-before seen answer to every child's question: 'So how does Santa deliver all those presents in one night?' The answer: Santa's exhilarating, ultra-high-tech operation hidden beneath the North Pole. But at the heart of the film is a story with the ingredients of a Christmas classic – a family in a state of comic dysfunction and an unlikely hero, Arthur, with an urgent mission that must be completed before Christmas morning dawns.    

               

        GROUP 3

    NAME OF THE SHOW : MUADZ SHOW

                                                NAME OF THE SEGMENT : HAPPY FEET 2

                                                THE HOST : MUAZ

THE LIST OF THE PANELS :

1. HAJAR DAHALAN as the Director
2. RAHAYU as the Producer
3. ZANARIAH as the Main actor
4. NISA as an actor.

SYNOPSI OF THE STORY : This story is about Mumble, The Master of Tap, has a problem because his tiny son, Erik, is choreo-phobic. Reluctant to dance, Erik runs away and encounters The Mighty Sven—a penguin who can fly! Mumble has no hope of competing with this charismatic n

ew role model. 

But things get worse when the world is shaken by powerful forces. Erik learns of his father’s “guts and grit” as Mumble brings together the penguin nations and all manner of fabulous creatures—from tiny Krill to giant Elephant Seals—to put things right.

  GROUP 4 

NAME OF THE SHOW : TONIGHT SHOW'S

NAME OF THE SEGMENT : EUROPE'S MOST WANTED???

THE HOST : AMIRUDDIN

THE LIST OF PANELS :

1. SYAHIRA as the Director
2. ARINA as the Skrip Writer
3. SITI as the Main actor
4. ROSFARINA as an actor

SYNOPSIS : this story is about continues from the event of the second film. Alex (Ben Stiller) has a nighmare about himself and friend abound his friends still stranded in Africa and finding they have all gotten old. Awaking from his dream


thanks for read, that all.......

 

Debate owwh Debate

Wednesday, 8 August 2012

      Helo!! Yesterday class was canceled because our class have CTU test at night. Today's class we did an activity. The activity we have to do is a debate. We have divided into 4 groups.Group government and group for opinion side I am a group with Arina, Suhana, Fatin, Nisa and Afiq. 


FIRST DEBATE :

  The debate are discuss about the topic : "is it considered cheating when your partner ( girlfriend/ boyfriend/ husband/ wife) was checking on other beautiful (girls/ boys) on facebook (poking/ liking, etc)?"

Group 1 is agree that it is considered as cheating if our partner was checking other person in Facebook because they are bored with their partner, want to find a beautiful/handsome partner, and culture shock.

  Goverment sides

Group 2 is against with this statement said that people checking on other people's FB to get more friends, activity during free time and for business.

                                                                   Agains the topic

SECOND DEBATE

The topic are discuss about  : "is it true that men are easy to work with and more creative than women especially when it involves group work?"

Group 3 agree that men are easy to work with because men are easy to tolerate, they can control their emotion and men usually like to understand about a topic compared to women who like to memorize it.

                                             

                                                                   Government sides

Group 4 is against with this statement said that women are more easy to work with men because women more alert when do their work and doesn't do their work at the last minutes compared to men who are lazy to do their own work.

  
                                                                        Against

            After all the Debate complete, Miss Zu ask for to choose which group is the best. The other member said that group 1 is good.Then we must update it at blog.so I have done it..hihihi

Development Paragraph / Transition Signal

Tuesday, & August 2012

                       hi you all. Meet again. First of all I want to say Thank for read my blog. I hope, from this blog we can use as a medium of exchange idea to make the improvement. I still remember that Miss Zu said that the the largest room in this world is improvement. So, the good improvement bring us more excellent. We should learn from mistake.

ok! let us learn a deveplopment paragraph

Format of a development paragraph

1. Topic sentences
2. Supporting details 1
3. Supporting details 2
4. Supporting details 3
5. concluding the statement.
   
   
   EXAMPLE FOR DEVELOPMENT PARAGRAPH:
   
   
        Children too can be protected with the practice of censorship. Everyone has to remember that television and movie theaters are not restricted for “adult only”. Children have a high tendency to imitate what they saw and heard from movies and television series. Vijaindren (2009) reported that many parents complained of the use of harsh and faulty languages the children picked up from what they watched be them cartoons or other so-called “children programmers”. She also gave few examples of children from using the four-letter words to even  a mutter to find a new parent when they are not satisfied with theirs. In addition, some “simple” scenes to adult can be very disturbing to children for instance the smoking scene. Parents educate their offspring that smoking is bad, but adults on television smoke with such ease and confidence. As a result of this, the children get confused. Another example of a disturbing scene is of course the exhibition of intimacy between a man and a woman which is forbidden in Asian culture in general.  The children will be  wondering why a parent turns off the television every time a couple is kissing. If the act is wrong, why do we have it on the television to be watched by everybody? Moreover, the parents sometimes are bombarded with difficult questions of this taboo subject since Asian adults are not very open when it comes to discussing sex especially with children. In short, snipping unacceptable languages and cutting demoralizing scenes off the movies and television series help protect children from lessons they are not ready for yet and save parents from some unpredictable embarrassing scenes.
   
   
   TRANSITION SIGNAL : WHAT IS THAT??
   
   Transition signals are connecting words or phrases that act like bridges between parts of your writing. They link your sentences and paragraphs together smoothly so that there are no abrupt jumps or breaks between ideas.
   
   
   EXAMPLE WHO TO USE THE TRANSITION
   
   1-Marco loves to go swimming in the ocean.         
   2- his parent won't allow him to do that
   
   To combine that sentence, we should use a transition signal to make reader understand the sentence.
   Marco loves to go swimming in the ocean. however, his parent won't allow him to do that.
   * the transition, however tell the reader that the logical relationship between the two ideas is contrast.

 

example:2

               Ahmad love to ski             +           he likes to fish
                                              > moreover
                                              > futhermore
                                              > in addition
                                              > besides
                     = Ahmad love to ski. Furthermore, he like to fish
                                  

         
            I think that all for now. to more clearly you can do and exercise and practice more. Here are some link that you can refer
                    http://www.lc.unsw.edu.au/onlib/trans1.html   I hope this note will help you. ok. bye
     

Main Idea : where is the main idea?

Wednesday, 1 August 

                  FINDING THE MAIN IDEA

Assalamualaikum, hai. meet again. Everyone start the first day of month wiht a big of SMILE >____<

Today lesson we are study how to find the main idea at the essay. 

 

In finding main idea,ask yourself

• What idea is common to most of the text?
• What is the idea that relates the parts to the whole?
• What opinion do all the parts support?
  
  
   
   Find the main idea directly
  example :
  Sleep problems can be avoided if you follow a few simple guidelines. First, don't drink alcoholic beverages or drinks with caffeine before bedtime. Next, do not exercise within three hours of bedtime. Finally, plan a sleep routine. Every day, go to bed at the same time and get up at the same time.
  
  
  The implied for Main Idea
  example :
  A back swimmer has a rounded back and it's underside is flat. When it floats on its back it's look like a little boat. It rows itself along in the water using its two hind legs like oars. The backswimmer spends most of its time upside down.
   
   .....................................................................................................................................................
   
   As usual, after the lesson,  Miss Zu are will give and activities.Almost all of the activities are by group. We are divided into five group. We are has been show 2 movie which is PETRONAS MOVIE. From that movie, we had to write the main idea in a piece of paper.
  
  
  Both of the movie are story about the parent and their child.
  The first movie is story about the the love that given from parent cannot be exchange with money.
   
  After all the group are show the main idea, group Zahira is the best and correct
   
  
   
   The second movie, my group is the best
  
   
  
  
  From that, now I can more understand who to find the main idea. I hope thiswill give me more strengh to make a summary or and essay. Credit to Miss Zuraidah for help us a lot.
   
   
   
   
   
   
  
  

So do you think that you can act and sing

Monday, 30 July

hello, hello, hello to everyone reader

My lecture entered class and write at the white board. the sound like this " Do you think that you can act and sing? " . Based on that, I already guess that she are want us to make and activities sing and act like a theater musical. oh my goodness... sound that intressted but i dont know who to act and sing in front of my friend. 

We are divide into 5 group and i was a group with fara,Jasman,hanifah,rosfarina and amanda

each group are given a topic and my topic is.......

<---------------  All my class performance went

                      we are act and sing. it is  

                      enjoyable =) 

THE FIRST GROUP ( MY GROUP )

                       we are act and sing and act based on the topic given. Although it is the first time we are do such activities it can be experience for us. Our story is like we as a food seller during Ramadan season. We are actually atract a tourist toward Malaysia. 

                                            The actor is : Jasman,Hanifah,Rosfarina,Amanda,fara and rina

 

 

 

SECOND GROUP

There topic is rotten shopper... 

This group act to show the attitude when shopping or in a shopping complex

They actually act as same as a usually our habit while   

they sing a price tag song.

The actor is : Amiruddin, Nisa, Suhana, Aida and Arina

THIRD GROUP

The topic for this group is story about the bonus that will be received to worker.
It felt enjoy to watch their presentation.
This group sing Maher Zain song, "THANKS TO ALLAH"...  yaaa.I like that song
The actor : Ikhwan,Hajar,Zahira,Fatin and Ferzia

FOURTH GROUP

Their presentation is story about kidnapping. The kipnapped try to kipnap a girl and try to make a warning and ask for made a payment.
This group sing 2 songs which are LOVE U LIKE A LOVE SONG and WISH U WERE HERE. 

All of them act greatly but it was a problem went they are singing. the song that they sing not clearly..

The actor : Muadz, Nabila, Syamimi, khadijah, and Rafidah

FIFTH GROUP

their topic is "VOTE FOR ELECTION"
what is vote is actually? do you had been heard before this??
Vote is to prosses to select a leader in a political.
The requirement for this is People 21 years old above and as a Malaysian resident can vote.
This group sing 2 song which is WE ARE YOUNG and TALKING TO THE MOON,

To me, the song " we are young " is suitable with that story but the chosen song " talking to the moon" is not suitable for that story.. Anyway, good job 

The actor is Afiq, Zanariah, Syahira, Rahayu and Shawalni.

 

That all for today. I think we can do better went we had a enough time for preparation.. bye bye.. =)