Sunday, 2 September 2012

Problem and solution essay

Monday, 27 August 2012

ASSALAMUALAIKUM
today class was postponed at night which is at lab. We were asked to do an essay again. As usual, we have  to divide into 5 groups. My group members are Afiq, Nisa, Amanda, Hajar and Rina (me) . Miss Zu asked us to choose 1 of the 5 movie clips. my group got movie (OPEN HOUSE THIEVE )

this is the my group essay :


Open houses are a long-standing tradition in the sale of residential real estate to show more people to a home for sale. The real estate agents put out signs on road or near street corners to draw drive-by traffic and usually list the homes in the real estate sections of newspapers to bring in more people. At an open house, the real estate agents show off their latest properties and entice prospective buyers with the warmth and luxury of a "lived-in" home. But this time-honoured tradition has unexpectedly opened the door to more than just interested buyers (Johnson, 2012). Thieves are also finding gold mines in these attractive homes. The are some factors of people stealing some of item in an open house which are they being attracted the items in the house, lack of securities as well as they have influence by friends to take some of the items in the house.
The first factor that contribute people to steal in an open house is they attracted to the items that have in the open house as a display. Some of the open house put a valueable thing as a display to make more attractive and ellegent for viewing. Normally open house events and home viewings are a wonderful for getting your house noticed in a big way. However, while the majority of people coming through our  home are likely to be legitimate prospective buyers, there is also the risk that some of them will be more interested in what they can steal from our home. According to (Sharon,2012), some of person use a tactic act like a pergnant women. It is because to discover their stelling thing. So, the people do not notice than they are actualy as a thief. Open house thieves are quick to size up the flow of the crowd and opportunities to steal. Favorite targets include glassware, silverware, jewelry, laptops, and prescription drugs. Some thieves are even cagey enough to steal only a few pills instead of the whole bottle so the theft will go unnoticed. Thus, the best way solution of this problem is the open house should remove the valuable things. Do not put them in a drawer that it is  too easy for a thief to open it when no one is looking. Instead, lock them in the trunk of your car or place them in a safety deposit box. (Rowland, n.d.)
The second  factor of  people stealing in an open house is no securities provided by the real estate agent in the open house.  When no securities in the open house, people easily steal the value things on the table, kitchen and everywhere. Real estate agent must aware the visitor that come in the house because we are do not know whether they have a good or bad attitudes. This problem we must solve because it makes the agent loss to pay all the lost things. In order to solve this problem , real estate agent must put a security cameras in and out a house. In addition , real estate agent must put minimum 10 security camera at different place for example dining room , room , kitchen , garage , stare and outside the house. This solution can make the visitors or thieves scare to steal a things in a house because the security camera is monitor by the security guard. Based from a information of safe guard the world in the United Stated home break-ins occur every 13 seconds and homes without security systems are up to 300% more likely to be broken into.
Finally, influenced from bad friends also one of the factors for stealing from the open house. Mostly,every open house stiil got an item for them to display since someone did not confirmly buy the house and the house still have the truthful owner. Based on this situation, the thieft will take this chance to openly steal the item from the houses.They will bring one or two friends to back up them when they stealing but,sometimes the thieft also will influence their friends to take part and steal from the houses. This in turn causes someone who did not even think about stealing  to steal and soon it will become bad habits for them. It shown how influence from friends which is long time thieft will cause someone who only come to the open house to see the house, become a thieft and steal an items from the open house. Hence, to solve this problem they should take time to think about this situation. According to Neik (2012), they should think for a moment and take a little space about the person they are right now compared to the person they were when they in one or two years ago. What qualities have they take from the people who surround them? If the change come in positive or negative ways?If their friends only influenced them to take part in stealing escpecially in open house it directly shown that they are not a good person to be with.People like them will never back up when someone is getting trouble and only thinking about their self pleasures and according to Neik (2012), sometimes we have to leave behind those who are not willing top change with us to do good activities.
                In conclusion, being attracted at the things in the house, lack of securities and influence by bad friends are the three factors which contribute to the stealing from open house. The habit of stealing must be prevented as this can give impact especially to the real estate agent.  It will also be affected by the other visitors who came to the open house. This is because the open house is to show to he visitors or buyers who want to buy the house. It will be not interesting if the open house is empty without any decorations or items in it. Therefore, it is necessary that real estate agents as well as the visitors to do some efforts to overcome this problem such as hire safety guard, hide or remove the valuable items in the house and think before do an action.

REFERENCES
Johnson, J. (2012). Demand media. Retrieved August 21, 2012, from         homeguides.sfgate.com/meaning-open-houses-1222.html
Neik, A. (2012). How your friends influene your life. Retrieved August 21, 2012, from             http://www.divinecaroline.com/22050/83744-friends-influence
Rowland, T. (n.d.). Estate homes and properties. Retrieved August 21, 2012, from             http://www.homesbytia.com/avoid-theft-during-an-open-house-pasadena-ca.htm
Safe guard the world. (2008). Retrieved August 21, 2012, from             http://www.safeguardtheworld.com/statistics.html
Sharon G.F, (2012, April 10) Protecting  yourself aginst open house theft.. Retrieved        August 21, 2012, from http://voices.yahoo.com/protecting-yourself-against-open-    house-theft-11195196.html

I think that all for today. By all the practice that i had done, i hope that can improve my english.







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