Argumentative essay

Wednesday 29 August

In the afternoon class, we have to do a argumentative essay by individual. Miss Zu was teaching how to write an argumentative essay because usually question of argumentative essay will come out in final exaination.

After that, we had to do an essay based on the question given....

This is my essay for argumentative essay..

Women are becoming bolder as well as more aggressive and men are more sensitive

                As a human being, as we know men and women have their own advantages and disadvantages. Some people claim that their gander is more excellent but it is actually depend to that person. Sometime in the other side men is more expert and as well as women. It is influence by the nature and the environment. In this era of globalisation, sometime men job are become as women carrier and the other sides. For example, normally we say that women are more expert to cook and become a chef but nowadays it is monopoly by men likes our famous chef in Malaysia is chef Wan. Due to that, although some women are brave and aggressive and certain men are sensitive but I still believe that men are becoming bolder and more aggressive as well as women are more sensitive.

            Those who are against these ideas may say that certain women are involved in a dangerous situation and become as a police, soldier, pilot and marine. According to Leila (2006) stated that from the childhood her ambition is became a police and she has proven that she a brave women. This job are fully need of brave to involve in this situation. It is fair to said that women are not enough brave without evaluate them first? We should respect women ability and can do a something challenging and has a high risk. With that, clearly we cannot judgment women as a weak person. Furthermore, we cannot simplify all women are coward because have many woman are become a leader. For example a woman has a child and her husband was passed away, she can protect her child by their own without getting help from others. What they say might be true. However, in a reality we seen than man are braver compared to women.  Men are born to be a leader and women should be protecting as well as they is week person. Even is Islamic religious, man should be a leader. To be a leader, once should becoming bolder. Machiavelli said that as a leader, we cannot make an impetuous decision but must brave to make a brilliant decision. Furthermore, usually we see that movie preferred by man is horror movie likes ghost or something like that and for women they is more preferred to watch a thriller movie such as romantic or joking movie. In short, no doubt to say that men are braver compared to women.

Some people might feel that women are has an aggressive attitude. Psychologists are proving that women are pretend to be more dispersion and they believe there are many factors contribute toward a person spiralling into dispersion such as pressure in job or study, death of family member and a bad influence of friend. Perry (2009)women are easily to stress and tension.  To be   In this, women are fell tension. This situation usually occurs especially went they in menstruation cycle, they are in unbalance condition. They swiftly to be a moody and this might to be more aggressive. Actually women are difficult to balance their emotion and will make them in depression. As a result, they will do and unexpected thing and more aggressive toward others person. Due to the fact claim is true. Nevertheless, Men is actually more aggressive because they are may too be more hot tampered. There are easily defy challenge and went they are loss, the might shame and at last, they might to quarrel. In that, they will be terrorized toward others. Thus, clearly we can see that men are more aggressive than women.

            Opponents may say that men are a sensitive person. Although they seem brutal and macho, they actually a sensitive person. They may take heart especially when it involves his belonging such as some people libel him or her family. Besides that, men are sensitive went women that more high rank admonish him. They cannot accept than women are has more high rank. In that, he may be more sensitive. However, this statement might be irrelevant due to the fact that claim women are more sensitive. As a women nature, they has a soft heart that easily take heart especially went the statement is not true. Furthermore, they also will sensitive went someone tell their appearance are not good enough. As we know, women always want look beauty while went has people said something bad to her appearance, they might take serious because there is more sensitive. Thus, in this situation, women are more sensitive than men.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that men are more brave and aggressive while women are more sensitive. They are many facts that we can see based on the statement. So, do you think that statement is relevant? Just recap from our viewer and seen from our once experience. When we say a bolder and aggressive word? We will imagine for a man while went we say sensitive, we are more prefers to women. Based on that, it is clearly show that my statement is strongly enough due to the fact that are been prove. Lastly, I to say again than men are more brave and aggressive while women are more sensitive.

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REFFERENCE:

Leila, (2006), women are more independent and more brave compared men - It is true? Retrieved September 1, 2012, from http://www.powermenandwomen/drl/paper.com

Perry, (2009, August 16).women are more sensitive than men. Retrieved September 1, 2012, from http://www.control.way//G:assgment/resoures//.html