Wednesday 29 August
In the afternoon class, we have to do a argumentative essay by individual. Miss Zu was teaching how to write an argumentative essay because usually question of argumentative essay will come out in final exaination.
After that, we had to do an essay based on the question given....
This is my essay for argumentative essay..
Women are becoming
bolder as well as more aggressive and men are more sensitive
As a human being, as we know men
and women have their own advantages and disadvantages. Some people claim that
their gander is more excellent but it is actually depend to that person.
Sometime in the other side men is more expert and as well as women. It is
influence by the nature and the environment. In this era of globalisation,
sometime men job are become as women carrier and the other sides. For example, normally
we say that women are more expert to cook and become a chef but nowadays it is
monopoly by men likes our famous chef in Malaysia is chef Wan. Due to that, although
some women are brave and aggressive and certain men are sensitive but I still
believe that men are becoming bolder and more aggressive as well as women are
more sensitive.
Those
who are against these ideas may say that certain women are involved in a
dangerous situation and become as a police, soldier, pilot and marine. According
to Leila (2006) stated that from the childhood her ambition is became a police
and she has proven that she a brave women. This job are fully need of brave to
involve in this situation. It is fair to said that women are not enough brave
without evaluate them first? We should respect women ability and can do a
something challenging and has a high risk. With that, clearly we cannot
judgment women as a weak person. Furthermore, we cannot simplify all women are
coward because have many woman are become a leader. For example a woman has a
child and her husband was passed away, she can protect her child by their own without
getting help from others. What they say might be true. However, in a reality we
seen than man are braver compared to women. Men are born to be a leader and women should
be protecting as well as they is week person. Even is Islamic religious, man
should be a leader. To be a leader, once should becoming bolder. Machiavelli
said that as a leader, we cannot make an impetuous decision but must brave to make
a brilliant decision. Furthermore, usually we see that movie preferred by man
is horror movie likes ghost or something like that and for women they is more
preferred to watch a thriller movie such as romantic or joking movie. In short,
no doubt to say that men are braver compared to women.
Some people might
feel that women are has an aggressive attitude. Psychologists are proving that
women are pretend to be more dispersion and they believe there are many factors
contribute toward a person spiralling into dispersion such as pressure in job
or study, death of family member and a bad influence of friend. Perry
(2009)women are easily to stress and tension.
To be In this, women are fell tension. This
situation usually occurs especially went they in menstruation cycle, they are
in unbalance condition. They swiftly to be a moody and this might to be more
aggressive. Actually women are difficult to balance their emotion and will make
them in depression. As a result, they will do and unexpected thing and more
aggressive toward others person. Due to the fact claim is true. Nevertheless,
Men is actually more aggressive because they are may too be more hot tampered.
There are easily defy challenge and went they are loss, the might shame and at
last, they might to quarrel. In that, they will be terrorized toward others.
Thus, clearly we can see that men are more aggressive than women.
Opponents
may say that men are a sensitive person. Although they seem brutal and macho,
they actually a sensitive person. They may take heart especially when it
involves his belonging such as some people libel him or her family. Besides
that, men are sensitive went women that more high rank admonish him. They
cannot accept than women are has more high rank. In that, he may be more
sensitive. However, this statement might be irrelevant due to the fact that
claim women are more sensitive. As a women nature, they has a soft heart that
easily take heart especially went the statement is not true. Furthermore, they
also will sensitive went someone tell their appearance are not good enough. As
we know, women always want look beauty while went has people said something bad
to her appearance, they might take serious because there is more sensitive.
Thus, in this situation, women are more sensitive than men.
In conclusion, I
strongly believe that men are more brave and aggressive while women are more
sensitive. They are many facts that we can see based on the statement. So, do
you think that statement is relevant? Just recap from our viewer and seen from
our once experience. When we say a bolder and aggressive word? We will imagine
for a man while went we say sensitive, we are more prefers to women. Based on that,
it is clearly show that my statement is strongly enough due to the fact that
are been prove. Lastly, I to say again than men are more brave and aggressive
while women are more sensitive.
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